Draft Workshop

I am concerned about the structure of the paper. There are a few long paragraphs which might need to be split into two, however deciding where to split them was difficult because the entire paragraph is a fluid idea about the same topic. I very rarely mention the argument actually being made by Plato, I know that the paper is supposed to be about the rhetorical effectiveness of the piece but I'm not sure if I should mention the piece's argument more. Overall I am mostly concerned with fluidity and the cohesiveness of my paper as a whole.